求英语大神帮忙看下我写的英语图画作文 ,带图,感觉很多地方句型时态语法词组有问题,但想不到怎么改进

2025-05-09 12:25:41
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he thinks...
the people 建议改成 the one... thinks
in the society
现在行文有点罗圈化,建议举例子。 for supporting example, only by buliding up sufficient confidence, can one make the most of his or her ability and perform well in the comany. Such a spirit helps people find more opportunities to advance in one's career.