英文改错

This article introduces advanced language network examination of(改for) systems(改system) analysis, design and development of the entire process, the use of data flow diagram, the process flow chart of the system, such as the design(可改designing) process detail. （加It includes）Outlines(改小写) （加of） the HTML, ASP, database technology, the use of WINXP + ASP + ACCESS platform, analysis, design, open and debug high-level language network examination of the entire process of application platform. Advanced Language Testing System is a network of prospects (加of) DreamweaverMX2004, FireworksMX2004, Adobe Photoshop7.0, such as software, ASP programming background with the technology developed.

不知道亲的句子是哪儿来的，不过英文里很少有这么复杂的句子。颍对背景知识不了解，只好就事论事的改一下。